MrTakoyama's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Abnormal Files]

What can I say that the previous four haven't already? Congrats on the approval, you deserve it.

[Sedusa pin-up]

Anatomy and linework are solid, and shading looks good. The only real complaint I have is the low contrast. You should either invest in a scanner or do "auto-adjust colors" in Photoshop when you digitize these, because they're really dark.

Fromation23 responds:

Thanks for the feedback 🙏🏾

[The Left Behind One]

The shading is really cool looking, but it doesn't make sense for the sun to be where it is, too much of his front is lit up. Unless there's something I'm missing RE Bloodborne lore having two suns (a non-PS4 haver is speaking, listen and learn) I'd remove the sun or extend the canvas upward and move the sun with it.

[Ranma chibi animated_Miau]

Solid work, the lineart and shading are pro level.

0chidori0 responds:

thank you very much for youre words ;v; glad you liket!

[Dark Deku design 2]

Perfect Cell meets Metal Sonic?

[Duck Song Tribute]

Yeah, that's basically dead on how it looks.

[More Hellscape stuff.]

Banger after banger, huh? More good stuff.

[Goofy Shonen]

Reminds me of old-school Newgrounds culture in the aughts. Technically solid with a fun style, good stuff. I envy your line confidence.

[Inktober Day 10- Nomadic]

Interesting designs. Is that a dinosaur man? Perspective is really funky, though, the chairs and table in the background look really wonky, and the wall is at a weird angle. If you're going for Picasso, then more power to you, but if not it detracts from the really quite solid foreground. Only note there is that her face looks like it's at an unnatural angle, it looks two-dimensional (which, of course, it is, but that's beside the point.) Keep working at it!

StarGroundsUltra responds:

Yeah, I'm experimenting on different angles but mostly working on getting background details. Thanks for the advise, I'll try to make it look less like two angle perspectives botched into each other

[Hellscape stuff.]

Radical.