MrTakoyama's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sedusa pin-up]

Anatomy and linework are solid, and shading looks good. The only real complaint I have is the low contrast. You should either invest in a scanner or do "auto-adjust colors" in Photoshop when you digitize these, because they're really dark.

Fromation23 responds:

Thanks for the feedback 🙏🏾

[Ranma chibi animated_Miau]

Solid work, the lineart and shading are pro level.

0chidori0 responds:

thank you very much for youre words ;v; glad you liket!

[Inktober Day 10- Nomadic]

Interesting designs. Is that a dinosaur man? Perspective is really funky, though, the chairs and table in the background look really wonky, and the wall is at a weird angle. If you're going for Picasso, then more power to you, but if not it detracts from the really quite solid foreground. Only note there is that her face looks like it's at an unnatural angle, it looks two-dimensional (which, of course, it is, but that's beside the point.) Keep working at it!

StarGroundsUltra responds:

Yeah, I'm experimenting on different angles but mostly working on getting background details. Thanks for the advise, I'll try to make it look less like two angle perspectives botched into each other

[Rando RandoTober: Day 10 Auxi]

Looks like something you'd see on Nickelodeon or Cartoon Network in the 2000s. Good stuff.

Dar-K-NG responds:

huh, she does

[LVAtober 2024 - Day 10 Background street crosser]

is that Linkara

creating-creator responds:

It's his ancestor.

Just kidding, it's a background character from Cliffside by Liam Vickers. You can see him at times 1:06, 7:31, and 8:47

[Cute Xenomorph (ALIEN)]

I don't know if it says more about me or the state of the internet at large that I clicked on this expecting big juicy xenotits full of acidic milk but when it was genuinely just cute I felt a sigh of relief. Cute Xenomorph indeed.

ZazakiSan responds:

Don't worry I don't like the NSFW art of the Xenomorph either

[BRROOLY]

epic. Love the effects.

Theicekreammanz responds:

Thaank yoou!<3

[Enjoy Sparkingzero!]

Goku's face is a bit off, but to be fair that angle is kind of rough to work with. Try studying the original frame. Your avatar looks straight out of Dr. Slump or something, you stylized it well to fit Toriyama's style. Colors look good. Good luck!

NoNthings responds:

Thanks