MrTakoyama's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[WITCH AURELIA FOR HALLOWEEN!!!]

Unless her dress and hat are made of something like velvet, the highlights should be less diffused. Without that layer of sheen, you already have good shading here. It's not quite pillow shading, you're clearly taking light direction into account, but it suffers for similar reasons. Either remove the highlights or sharpen them a bit. Otherwise, your anatomy is solid and your character is cute. Good luck and Godspeed!

[DOOM Slayer The Great]

I like the artstyle here, it reminds me of old animations on Youtube or this very website. You don't see too much stuff that looks like this these days and I think that's a damn shame. Good stuff.

[Rando RandoTober: Day 10 Auxi]

Looks like something you'd see on Nickelodeon or Cartoon Network in the 2000s. Good stuff.

Dar-K-NG responds:

huh, she does

[Velma Dinkley]

Solid work. I wish I had your line confidence.

[LVAtober 2024 - Day 10 Background street crosser]

is that Linkara

creating-creator responds:

It's his ancestor.

Just kidding, it's a background character from Cliffside by Liam Vickers. You can see him at times 1:06, 7:31, and 8:47

[Cute Xenomorph (ALIEN)]

I don't know if it says more about me or the state of the internet at large that I clicked on this expecting big juicy xenotits full of acidic milk but when it was genuinely just cute I felt a sigh of relief. Cute Xenomorph indeed.

ZazakiSan responds:

Don't worry I don't like the NSFW art of the Xenomorph either

[Mikoshin is in heat]

The anatomy on this is confusing. I get that she's an angel and might have more flexibility, but the ass looks like a completely different angle composited into the rest of the body, or like her spine is broken. It's tough getting good ass and tit shots in from the same angle and have it obey the laws of anatomy, I know. But cheating it like this is too noticeable. Unless that rascal Toyotaro put it in the most recent chapter of the manga that Vados can lengthen her spine and twist it like a snake, then I'll really have egg on my face.
The face looks good though, close to the original Toriyama style but puts your own spin on it (love the lashes).

My advice: Work on your anatomy. Study both photos and artists you respect. Good luck and Godspeed.

[BRROOLY]

epic. Love the effects.

Theicekreammanz responds:

Thaank yoou!<3

[Miku's Back]

This is clearly Miku's front, but I'll allow it.

[Enjoy Sparkingzero!]

Goku's face is a bit off, but to be fair that angle is kind of rough to work with. Try studying the original frame. Your avatar looks straight out of Dr. Slump or something, you stylized it well to fit Toriyama's style. Colors look good. Good luck!

NoNthings responds:

Thanks