MrTakoyama's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark Deku design 2]

Perfect Cell meets Metal Sonic?

[Duck Song Tribute]

Yeah, that's basically dead on how it looks.

[More Hellscape stuff.]

Banger after banger, huh? More good stuff.

[Goofy Shonen]

Reminds me of old-school Newgrounds culture in the aughts. Technically solid with a fun style, good stuff. I envy your line confidence.

[Inktober Day 10- Nomadic]

Interesting designs. Is that a dinosaur man? Perspective is really funky, though, the chairs and table in the background look really wonky, and the wall is at a weird angle. If you're going for Picasso, then more power to you, but if not it detracts from the really quite solid foreground. Only note there is that her face looks like it's at an unnatural angle, it looks two-dimensional (which, of course, it is, but that's beside the point.) Keep working at it!

StarGroundsUltra responds:

Yeah, I'm experimenting on different angles but mostly working on getting background details. Thanks for the advise, I'll try to make it look less like two angle perspectives botched into each other

[Hellscape stuff.]

Radical.

[WITCH AURELIA FOR HALLOWEEN!!!]

Unless her dress and hat are made of something like velvet, the highlights should be less diffused. Without that layer of sheen, you already have good shading here. It's not quite pillow shading, you're clearly taking light direction into account, but it suffers for similar reasons. Either remove the highlights or sharpen them a bit. Otherwise, your anatomy is solid and your character is cute. Good luck and Godspeed!

[DOOM Slayer The Great]

I like the artstyle here, it reminds me of old animations on Youtube or this very website. You don't see too much stuff that looks like this these days and I think that's a damn shame. Good stuff.

[Rando RandoTober: Day 10 Auxi]

Looks like something you'd see on Nickelodeon or Cartoon Network in the 2000s. Good stuff.

Dar-K-NG responds:

huh, she does

[Velma Dinkley]

Solid work. I wish I had your line confidence.